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Mosaics






Pockets of twilight
filling with the days sun;
warmth and joy
stirring fires within -
lovers, dancers, loners 
circle the flames: 
different colours attacting
different moths, each
a part of the portrait
unseen




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  • donnz
    October 9, 2009
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    Contemplative

    the imagery you have revealed
    I have not seen since I was a 'Hippy
    singing songs around a campfire.
    Thank you for that.