Moments of Forever

What is love but fleeting distance
memories together
moments of a life time
a reason of forever.

Laid gentle neath my fingers
light of pastel star
immortal of the night time
beckons from afar.

To hold as yet surrender
what tear should fall alone
love is somewhere waiting
heart of my unknown.

Still your voice beside me
haunting yesterday
now I see you turning
to slowly walk away.

Author notes

Evanescence Songs.

Credit ~ My Immortal

This was very experimental but it seems to have worked

A contest entry

Evanescence Songs by BrokenAtBest. 400 points, ended October 23, 16 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest

Comments

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Jerrica
October 27
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this is a lovely poem
BrokenAtBest
October 10

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Thank you for entering. Your words were wonderful, very easily understood, and i can see the way it relates to the song very clearly.
JoeCavedIn
October 9

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Decent, understandable, few lines of literature. You happen to be in my Fvs list and time from time I'll pop in and say hello. I love the rose - that is on your page for various reasons. Take advantage of the time you have alone to write. See ya