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Picture of an autumn morning

The morning broke
Cold and clean
Red and orange leaves
Pasted against steel gray construction paper
A 2nd grade art project
Projected in real life
Outside my window
The smell of rotting
Foliage, made damp by the morning dew
  An overwhelming perfume
A cold morning
A good morning
An Autumn morning.

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  • JinSays gold member
    October 29

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    Lovely. very well imagined, easy to slip inside of this and wear it for a moment. I like it, thank you for taking the time to enter this contest and I wish you all the best.
    love,
    jin