Every night I watch
the luminous stars
in the beautiful
moonlit night sky.
[CHORUS]
The gentle breeze
strikes my cheeks
as I lay watching the
stars, when I think of you -
They twinkle
and remind me of
your beautiful eyes.
Every time I look up
I think of you and
wonder if you're doing
exactly the same thing.
Every time I'm here,
you're there, but my
heart is always with you
no matter where you are.
I know this because without
you, I can feel something missing.
Author notes
There's always something that reminds you of your special someone. A hobby perhaps? Or something that they said that they like doing such as watching the stars.
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I love the feelings in this... serenity, hope, longing, love.. great emtions
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You have wrote a beautiful poem here! Every line was pure amazingness and the flow was spot on. The ending actually tied the whole poem together nicely and I really liked it. Great emotion and I can see you have put allot of effort into putting this poem together.
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this write was simply amazing. i loved it. you show so much feeling and emotion. good job
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this is really good...it was just a lovely poem to read
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i really enjoyed this poem and i thought the chorus was really good
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Wonderful, true love comes out of every line.
Well done!
Nela
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This was very good and well written. I enjoyed reading this.It was full of emotions. I really liked it. Thanks for the read and keep up the good work!!
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I know exactly how this feels. Love is challenged from a distance, but it can still work if people make it happen. Nice job!
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Quite lovely. Missing someone special is like misplacing the remote. You can still change channels, but you have to get up to do it. Great write!
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