I
and so it goes
exhale sobriety
like sober is carbon monoxide
and too much will kill you
or so they all say
II
and so it goes
every inhale
bringing up my high
and i miss my daughter
i blow
away
III
and so it goes
i want love
like ride or die
but more
the most
you can give
and then some
im selfish
IV
and so it goes
my haircut cannot
replace my youth
but i will keep trying
with trying relationships
and its ok to breathe
What did you think
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jesus.
thats intense. curt and to the point, not an unnecessary word.
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i am at a loss for words. what a fantastic thing to read.
you also should never, ever stop writing. i am beyond impressed by the way you express yourself through words every time i witness your work.
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excellent!!!!!!
You never fail to amaze me with the honesty and depth to your musings...
The best I've yet to read from you!
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