His eyes are like the first autumn leaf falling
His kiss is like watching the clouds move
His laugh is like the hum of bee's
His humour is like a yawn; contagious
His love is like coffee; addictive and awakening
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it's short..and sweet i think.
A contest entry
- LOVE... by second-born.
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"His love is like coffee; addictive and awakening..."
now that's what I call 'good kind of love...' thanks for sharing this piece!!!!
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i agree. short but very sweet
i really liked this, especially the first line. 'His eyes are like the first autumn leaf falling' i know someone that that reminds me of.. well the whole things reminds me of him but great job on this. good imagery 
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