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there's a reason

there's a reason why i don't like,
to stay up and make out all night,
for i do fear,
when you are near,
i will no do things just right.

and by that i don't mean to hard,
or to simply just catch you off guard,
for you i do love,
and i don't wish to shove,
you away by going boldly to far.

Just a limeric

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  • Zia-
    October 9

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    Hmm interesting write you have here Victor, shucks I missed you a8 minutes after you logged this I came on.... hope your doing well...lol okay that is not a comment but cool write you have here, makes one think

    zia


    • VictorHolbrook
      October 13
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      why thank you zia! i figured i could try to get in touch with my irish side by writing a limerik. and it is too bad we missed each other, i would've liked to talked to you