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Confused

God damn it
I'm confused!

Broken up
and used

Chewed up
and spat
out again

WHY?

I'll tell you
why ...

I was sure
I could fly

The sky
was a mirage

of false
insecurity

Now here
I am ...

a cat
in a bird house

HOW?

I'll tell you
how ...

It will do for
now

I must allow
this to
happen ...

Because through
the confusion

I'll find myself





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  • poetryality silver member
    November 2, 2009

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    It is noteworthy that chaos usually leads to calm. Being lost only leads to being found. There is balance, and we have to take the time to find that end. Your poem is filled with emotion. I hope the solace comes.


    Much Love ♥

    Renee


  • AliceinPoetryLand gold member
    October 9, 2009

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    Haha wonderful! Very unique and creative indeed Thanks so much for your entry