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Crying

I don’t love you

  the way I used to

I don’t think I know you

  anymore

I tried to explain why I’m always

  so sad

I needed you to understand


I don’t know whose fault it is

    Days go by when I don’t notice it

It feels like you're so far away

    I ache through each empty day

Some days I remember how I loved you

  and its just like it used to be

But mostly,

I feel like I’m sinking

  hoping you’ll save me

  but we just cant reach each other

I want the times I was promised

  but I know they mean nothing to you

I cry on the inside when I’m not crying out loud
 
Tears for what used to be-
         
  you don’t want them

You think they’re worthless,
         
  but if you only knew

Each tear is for a day

  I won’t spend with you

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