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The watched

And so you dare to challenge me
You want to see what I can do
Think you can withstand my hot glare
That follows you across the room

Yes I see you standing there
You feel so proper and tall
Well I will reduce you to ashes my “friend”
And feel only inches small

For not collective thoughts that dwell
But fury inside my brain
My tongue plenty sharp to cut you with
Cruel enough to feed upon the pain

I can see you shifting uncomfortably
Looking all alone over there
Rooted as if bound by rope
Unable to escape my murderous glare

Do not stir as this excites me
This is not the grounds for chase
Though do not let this fool you because I would
Not one drop of you would go to waste 

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Breath in my chill
          If not surrender
                  To a frosty inferno
                            You’ll not remember
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Forgiven…no

Instead you’ll rue

Bringing my attention to you



You’ve shrunk a little……”friend”

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  • morgana raven Greeters member
    October 9

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    The ending is very very good. It faltered a little through the poem with the rhythm. Other than that, nice write. I do love the end though.


  • Little Charmy
    October 9
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    beautiful

    such a dark and beautiful piece.
    <3
    i love it!!