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Some silly thoughts from life ... ( not a poem )

Life is a game ...a challenge

Everyone has to look inside himself...
What he lost ?
What he is missing ?

Some happiness
Some bitterness

Some of everything ...

Yeah ! that's Life ...

what do u think of my words ?

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • el dia
    November 20
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    I'm happy u liked the words ... some may think those words are meaningless ....i think they hide a lot of meanings ...

  • Tercarro
    November 19
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    What is poetry

    Though you say this isn't a poem yet it flows because of the sincerity in those words. In this work I can hear you as if you sat beside me counselling me through a tough time. It made me think and because of that I think its poetic.