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Downward Spiral

Sleepless, but tired
Pills do nothing
Sick and aching
Waiting for relief
I ran myself ragged
Though I keep going
Head barely above water
Still sinking fast

Please God, let not this torture last

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  • UnionFireBug09
    October 12

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    if you get sick i'm gonna have to come out there and go all EMT on your @$$! take a break and rest! i've run myself ragged and wound up with meningitis. bad juju. don't you do it too. please?


  • Tarimornie
    October 9

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    rest

    Please do me the favor of giving yourself a rest. I know you are trying to make money but if you wear yourself more ragged than have what youve been feeling could only be the beginning. I want to know that you are in good health. I'm here for you anytime you need a friend or helping hand. *kisses and hugs* Take care of yourself.