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I miss your magic

The nights never have been so black
So much filth, hate and death
Oh please, I want you to be back
You listen as I grasp for breath

All I want is to be close
So I can tell you what I feel
All I want is to be closer
To make sure you know we’re real

The empty shell you’ve left behind
won’t be filled until you have returned
I miss your magic, your laugh, all that kind
Let’s hope we’re not heavily burned

I miss you,
Because I have something on my mind
Something, I’m not that proud of,
It’s too weird, too undefined

I try to act, all macho and tough
While everyone sees right through my fake cough
The fake curtain of lies, I spoke of before
When you’re back, are we ready to open the door?

A passage to the future, a road to the past
Our windows will shatter, all the leaves will wail
Our boat is shipping, oh so very fast
As the door is wide open, the curtain will sail

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  • Miss Faerie Greeters member
    October 11

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    Welcome to Allpoetry!

    This is an interesting piece, very emotive and it speaks to someone you desperately wish to be near.

    Great use of rhyme, easy flow to read.

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