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Warm Sept Day

Congratulations you're going to be a MOM!
Were the words uttered at me that warm Sept day
BABY! I thought as my heart raced
After 20 yrs and the Navy
I rest my hand on my swollen mid
A flutter I could have sworn greeted it
Finally I did the math as u grew from 32,64,128 cells
OH, boy how I can't wait
Who will you be?
Mr Langston Rhys or Miss Johnia Adore
To count your fingers and toes!
Then tickle your nose
I place the pillow to imagine how it would be
Turning sideway pretending to see a foot kicking me
Or could it be an elbow sticking me
Excuse you that is my bladder!
Oh,are you using my ribs to play hide and seek?
It's 9 o'clock time for u my lil treasure and I to go to bed

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  • Fritz O skennick gold member
    October 12

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    Beautifully done...

    Endearing narrative with such wonderful hope & uplifting theme that touched in its depth of feeling...
    Keep up the good work...
    Well done!!!

    • jahschosen
      October 15

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      thanks

      Its based on my reacting to finding out i was going to be a mom again after 20 yrs and a son in the navy! lol