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Alone

Days go by,
her anger turns into sadness,
smiles turn into tears,
everyday she fakes a smile,
admiring him the guy of her dreams,
the guy with all the girls after him,
she loves him, he doesnt want her,
her emotions change,
she turns mean,
shutting everyone out,
they are concerned,
shes acting strange...they say,
what to do now,
her heart is racing,
shes sobbing,
her heart hurts,
she wants someone to care,
tears hit the floor,
what can i do to change how i feel,
can he ever love me,
no she thinks looking out the window,
her parents start yelling,
telling her she's not wanted, telling her to leave,
she packs and leaves,
not knowing where to go, she finds a bench,
she hears footsteps,
she hides,
hoping to not be seen,
"Hello are you there" the male voice says,
she looks up at him and grabs her bags and runs,
footsteps are following her,
she looks back to see him following her,
she yells at him telling him to leave to just get away,
he laughs and sits on the side walk,
she just stands there and listens to him talk to himself,
tell his whole story,
she wants to walk away but can she,
she wonders am i really alone in this world,
she looks at him,
no  just maybe no i am not.

A contest entry

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  • XxNinjaNemoxX
    October 14

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    Quite sad.
    I reckon it could have done with a few stanzas.
    But it was really good It was sweet.
    Thanks for entering and best of luck
    xoxo.


  • hershey101
    October 12
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    very sadd im here for you even though i just met you love the poem! Keep it up!!


  • Naznomarn
    October 9
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    Aww saaaad
    But sweeet