Madly halucinating colors
Swirling around with words
Forming wagging tongues and lips
Seducing your senses merrily
Welcoming the Incubus
To finally set the soul free
Bled of passions' enthusiasms
Flowing to be recycled like water
Tie dye red glow is consuming
An infusion of inky perfection
Transfused into enslaved veins
Incubating a transfixed death
Glazed blue irises nearly gone
Widened pupils devour them
Causing spectacular premonitions
Taking over the seers surroundings
Whatcha think?
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Very dark, and mysterious. I like the flow to it. Very well written.
Keep it up!
Vhoori
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jeez..
this is very dark, and very similar in concept to something i wrote last night..
i would hate this write except it's so perfectly penned, that is an impossibility..
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Swan-san!
Thank you! It is good to be back to regular edition and comment reading on the site again. I had a bit of a dry spell and well it seems to have gone.
Thanks for this wonderful comment, and taking the time to check this piece out!
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