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From Here _V_ On In-Out-In-Out

            A --touch-->means
  more or < ,
  I can't be sure

but what !IDoKnow!
          my mind minds muddled
            con_sin_quen_ch_es



























Author notes

Title is supposed to be "From Here _V_ On In>Out< _ In _ >Out<"
but it doesn't like that, it makes it disappear... not cool, Kevin.
I demand the ability to <>words at will!

who doesn't love dirrrrrrty pretty?

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  • Janetheplain
    October 13
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    Very interesting. It flows to your own rhythm. Good luck.