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Consolation Prize

You know that feeling when you buy a box of Cracker Jacks
And you don’t even want them, you just want that
Decoder Ring,
But then, instead of the awesome Decoder Ring,
You get a sticker?
Just some stupid, lousy sticker?
I do.
I am that sticker.

I’m a lousy sticker
When he wanted a Decoder Ring.
I’m a white, “Participant” ribbon,
When he wanted to win the blue one.
I am a thirty dollar gift certificate
In a raffle for a cruise.

I’m a brunette,
When he’d rather have a blonde.
I’m tall and curvy,
When he wants short and thin.
I’m tough and smart,
When he wants prissy.
But he’ll take me anyway,
For a little while,
Until something better comes along.

I wish I were a Decoder Ring.
A blue ribbon,
A cruise.

Someday, I’d like to be something,
Someone’s idea of a win.

Anything…

but a consolation prize.

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  • This is excellent.


  • Matt E. Smith gold member
    October 9
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    I can feel the disappointment strongly here..excellently written.


  • TheDeadPool
    October 9
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    I am a thirty dollar gift certificate
    In a raffle for a cruise.

    I enjoyed the imagery. Good luck :]


  • Wyakin
    October 9
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    Wow, this was truly an amazing write. You have great skills


  • littlewing
    October 9
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    I love the imagery in this....I also relate
    Thank you for entering my contest
    And good luck

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