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Jose~Runaway

 

Canary yellow taxi-cabs, wait for their fares, idling along theater row,
in rustling taffeta and black tie tux with fine Cuban blends and Arpege,
tipping with bills that smell of leather, they call every cabby “Joe”
Separated by the void of ethnicity and the driver’s wire cage.


Unmistakably Mestizo, with darting dark eyes. He is young.


At shift-end he’ll toss the keys to the next Joe at home base.
The metallic taste of their brass finds its way to his tongue,
as he nervously tweaks the facial hair, newly grown on his face.

In his broken language, he mutters “hello, where you go?”


He knows this city almost as well as the back of his father’s hand.


The sting of remembrance lingers.


His Madre weaves baskets and sculpts St. Francis’ face in bread dough.

There is magic in her fingers.

She sells them both as novelties, to tourists that visit her stand.
His Padre stays lost in a tequila haze, his pockets filled with sand.
Here, weaving through traffic all night, a young cab driver, called Joe.

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  • Walking Oxymoron gold member
    October 27

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    Heyyy.
    Loved the picture there.

    I also like how you say the cabs are yellow, yet show a red picture...! Probably completely unintentional, but I liked it...

    I liked how you prhrased this work, how it read alsmot prose like, despite being split up into several stanzas.

    I would hate to be a taxi driver... yes, the void... and the unmistakable realization of knowing that there's nowehre else to go.


  • DinkyDiver gold member
    October 26

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    the sting of remeberance! A great line there! I love where you took this from the prompt and made it totally unique!! thankyou so much for entering my contest, goodluck xx DD

  • ecrivain01
    October 12

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    After I had cancer ...

    the first time, I drove a cab for years because I didn't want to think too much, and didn't know if there would be a reoccurrence. But that was 35 years ago, and there were no "Joes" like this one.

    In any case, you've done an excellent job of nailing your subject.

    • ecrivain01
      October 12
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      Highly dangerous too ...

      for that matter. Then again, back then nothing scared me. I figured I was living on borrowed time anyway, so what did it matter.


    • malmadre gold member
      October 12
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      It must be an interesting job, being exposed to such a diverse and enormous number of people from all nations. A lonely job I would imagine too. Thank you for input.


  • Dalaney gold member
    October 11

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    random rhyme...I love it I think I could do this! Ah, but the tales you weave for us...now that is a magic all of your own, my friend I remain in awe...

    Lane


  • individuality gold member
    October 11

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    a superb piece of poetry you have fashioned from the quill i know you keep behind your ear - taxi! call me a taxi please, okay, you're a taxi. thanks. a little bit hard to read the font but i am so wasted right now i am not sure if it is the font or just my mad eyes trying to blink and focus, i will return to read this later.


  • CitrineSunrise silver member
    October 9

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    I love poetry that tells an interesting story combining unique imagery with a recogizable protagonist. "separated by ethnicity and a wire cage" was a particulary telling line. Peace, Liz


  • awannabepoet
    October 9

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    Now here is where you can say I see and am not told, most excellent piece of poetry.

    Thank you so much for sharing this poem and your great talent.

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