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Vampire Infatuation

I wanted to fly with you
Disappear under a cloak of darkness and stars

I would have followed you anywhere
Through Styx and Hades to feel
Your non-existent heart beat against mine

I dreamed of you and fantasied
-Inspire by film, books and a
Erotically transposed  belief
of who you really are
and what you actually do

I imagined that you would be strong
I would feel protected and enclosed in your aura
In Truth, You were strong
you were tense and rough
Overwhelming and controlling
You could brush against me and
leave my skin bruised

I dreamed that you would be cold
and chill my skin like an icy gentle kiss
But your freeze chilled my breath
So that I suffocated under the
layer of ice that was your mercy

I dreamed you would enter me
like a lover
That it would tingle
with the same flirtatious prick of a blade
Instead, your penetration
was like an assault
A burning sensation like rape
Residing in my throat
That was simulataneously being
choked by your strength,
muffled by your cold,
And pierced with your teeth

A foolish child am I
To have dreamed of
Playing with Vampires...

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Written about vampires

A contest entry

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  • Fallen-Thumper
    November 10
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    thank you for entering

    A really great job and i love it, amazing and thanks for entering. Good luck!
    -penguin-


  • Sheilasbabygal4life
    November 10
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    This was a very nicely done piece that you have written here. It was good. I enjoyed reading this. Thanks for entering and best ofl uck too you in the contest.


  • Poetic Obscenity
    October 9
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    Damn

    Yet another amazing piece of which I found breath-taking. That's possibly the best poem I've read in this genre in a very long time. The way you say things...are perfection. It's hard to explain, they're just so smoothe...clever...and just, Amazing.
    Great job.<3

    It kind of reminds me of something my ex gf and I wrote. Take a look? (No where as good, though..I'm growing.)
    http://allpoetry.com/poem/4464909


  • zhaniswolf
    October 9
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    very nice. and at last the truth of vampires is revealed Great write. Thank you for entering and good luck.


  • JackJumper silver member
    October 9
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    good scribe, fantasy turned brutal truth.


  • PerpetualNight
    October 9

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    Oh wow, a great write! I love how you put the truth behind vampires in this. They have been romanticized to the point that they are not the 'villains' they were created to be.

    The word choice is perfect for this piece, everything seems to fit just right. Great job on a great poem!


  • angrypete3
    October 9
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    I really liked this ..It combines some fantasy with real human emotion...good luck in the contenst, I think you'll do well

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