Unborn life, thrives inside you, siphoning off extra nutrients
Growing and growing, as the world can see, a new member is waiting
And long before plaster and ink, you will know him inside and out
From the beat of his heart, to the imprint of his toes
He will be a part of you, and no matter how old he becomes
He will always be,
Your baby.
Author notes
AP Name: PerpetualNight
Name: Laneyshape (Okay that's my nickname, I hope it counts.)
I am actually very fond of my own name, Laney, as I have yet to meat anyone who spells it the same way. There are quiet a few unique names out there Some of my favorite include
Male: Tristan (Trist-an), Dominic (Dom-e-nick)
Female: Shira (She-ra), Nadia (Naw-Dee- ah)
A contest entry
- The Unborn!! by hellzkitkat420.
460 points, ended October 14, 5 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Give me the truth.
Comments
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short but sweet thank you an good luck
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Aww
Very sweet poem, little short but sweet -
I love this poem. the brevity contributes to the memorable effect. love the "spacing" of the last line, too.
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