Chorus
This little life of mine, I want to let it shine,
But this little light has lost its glow
Verse
Red skies are burned alive (to embers)
The ashes fall, in this sweet December
Chorus
This little life of mine, I want to let it shine,
But this little light has lost its glow,
It’s time I let it go
Verse
Red skies are burned alive (to embers)
The ashes fall, in this sweet December
(It’s snowing outside) x2
Chorus
This little life of mine, I want to let it shine,
But this little light has lost its glow,
It’s time I let it go
Author notes
A song about suicide, my shortest song on paper by far, i guess i wanted to keep it simple to kind of portray more raw emotions, commentt
Genre: Ballad
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Comments
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Short and simple as you mention, but very nicely done here!!


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It's cool that you enjoy writing lyrics, too.

You do a really nice job. I especially liked the verses. "Red skies are burned alive (to embers)" is a great line. Easy to feel that and to picture that. Keep up the good work.

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amazingness<3[:
short? yes.
simple? i guess.
extraordinary? hell to the yeah[x
this is great[:

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The simplest words describe one of the most complex situations.
This is truly powerful.
Only the best of the best can create a piece such as this.
[and i loved it.]
(:

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I really like the verse. I can picture
it in my mind.
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