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December

Chorus

This little life of mine, I want to let it shine,
But this little light has lost its glow


Verse

Red skies are burned alive (to embers)
The ashes fall, in this sweet December


Chorus

This little life of mine, I want to let it shine,
But this little light has lost its glow,
It’s time I let it go


Verse

Red skies are burned alive (to embers)
The ashes fall, in this sweet December

(It’s snowing outside) x2


Chorus

This little life of mine, I want to let it shine,
But this little light has lost its glow,
It’s time I let it go

Author notes

A song about suicide, my shortest song on paper by far, i guess i wanted to keep it simple to kind of portray more raw emotions, commentt

Genre: Ballad

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  • Topnotchsy
    October 30
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    Short and simple as you mention, but very nicely done here!!


  • superstition
    October 12

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    It's cool that you enjoy writing lyrics, too.
    You do a really nice job. I especially liked the verses. "Red skies are burned alive (to embers)" is a great line. Easy to feel that and to picture that. Keep up the good work.

  • amazingness<3[:

    short? yes.
    simple? i guess.
    extraordinary? hell to the yeah[x

    this is great[:

  • The simplest words describe one of the most complex situations.
    This is truly powerful.
    Only the best of the best can create a piece such as this.
    [and i loved it.]
    (:


  • Visit.Me.On.Mars
    October 11

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    =]

    I really like the verse. I can picture
    it in my mind.

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