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Tonight is for Us

Large chocolate eyes stare at me
Determined and confidant
Tonight will be for us
Everything we have worked for
Will finally be reached
As he and I barrel across the line
Our nose just barely before the next
Tonight is for us.

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Jacks Night To Win by Bonnie Marris

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  • Rheea gold member
    October 22
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    Jake looks serious about this win, I love your take on this.

    Thank you