Dear Hope,
I feel so sorry for you,
You get crushed,
In so many peoples lives.
You've been crushed in mine,
And in my boyfriends,
And my families.
I feel sorry for you,
Because people trust you,
And then something murders you,
Throws you to the ground,
And beats you till your dead.
Sometimes you make people happy,
But more often then not....
You usually ruin peoples lives
Dear, Dear Hope,
Go crawl under a tree
And DIE!!!
Quit ruining lives!
Sincerely,
Me
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option 2
A contest entry
- Because I have points I need to give away by zhaniswolf.
700 points, ended October 23, 22 entries
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Do you agree, at least a little?
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Very much so do I agree. You're an amazin writer
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I do agree. Fully and completely.
You get better with each line you write -
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thanks girl.... i dont think so though
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lol... quite an interesting piece here. a letter to Hope. Thank you for entering and good luck.
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