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Le Cirque De La Vie

Life isn't
always candy,
It's a ring of masters...jesters...fools

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Prompt: Circus
11 words

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  • Griswold silver member
    October 8

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    Well now this is about as true as it gets isnt it? i know plenty of all types and some that qualify for all as well. Best of luck to you... Scott


  • islekine gold member
    October 8

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    Well penned!

    Thanks for entering! Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


  • aboomer silver member
    October 8
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    Great depth in so few words!
    No criticism.....
    best wishes in the contest


  • penman gold member
    October 8
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    Wonderful

    A very creative word choice. Best of luck in the contest