crazy cats
maniacial monkeys
happy hippos
eating popcorn
watching human cannonballs
Author notes
not really
11 words
prompt: circus
A contest entry
- Quick! again...8...15...11...hike! by islekine.
700 points, ended October 8, 8 entries
Bronze trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Please tell me what you think
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Haha... I'd bet they'd think what a strange lot we are if they indeed were watching us!!
Congrats on the deserved bronze!
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haha
ace love it..
You are great with these types of writes from this image
I would be clueless
awesome
best wishes hun
Julie
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thank you so much Julie - glad you enjoyed.
I wanted this to come across as a reversal of roles - the animals watching a human circus......but with only 11 words, I don't think I made it that clear.....lol....
anyways
best wishes
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very clever....says alot in just a few words...just keep those damn clowns away from me..lol...(I'm serious)...good luck in the contest
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thank you so much for reading and commenting angrypete3 - I appreciate it. Glad you enjoyed.
I know a lot of people who are afraid of clowns......Maybe they watched Stephen King's "It"......lol
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I've been to the circus...
Three times in my life...each time was a magical experience!
I love it!
Thanks for entering!!
Best wishes in the contest and always!
Write on and on...
and
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thank you islekine - glad you enjoyed.
I meant this like a picture of the animals watching humans preform in a circus - but with only 11 words, guess I didn't make it clear.....lol
anyways - thanks
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i kinda like to watch those guys myself, nothing like a big bang to brighten up a kids face. I may be old but dammit I'm still a kid inside. Best of luck to you... Scott
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thank you Griswold for reading and commenting - I appreciate it.
I like to watch them, too - being a kid inside myself also. I meant this as a reversal of roles - the animals enjoying us as a circus.....but with only 11 words, it didn't come across that clearly.....
again, thanks
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Aw, how very cute(picture)!
So adorable!
Nice take on the prompt.
Good luck to you!
Safely hidden within her fantasies,
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thank you so much Dreamer with Dreams for reading and commenting.
glad you enjoyed this - I just couldn't think....lol
best wishes to you also
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excellent
what a great take. so very well expressed. Best of luck in the contest
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thank you penman - you are being very kind....lol
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Yeah!
lololol
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