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Stay With Me

Let my kisses fall upon you
like a gentle morning shower
Let the feelings that I grew
turn into a budding flower

Let me wake the morning to
the smile on your face
With my loving arms round you
in my hearts embrace

Let me paint a picture of
beauty that's untold
Let me give the kind of love
you will treasure to behold

Let me feel your tenderness
my love for you is blind
Let me hold your soft carress
and leave the world behind

Let me love you like no one else
ever has before
Hurry before my heart melts
to a distant shore

Let me give you anything
a woman could desire
Let me give you everything
true love does inspire





Author notes

Written for a lady I met this morning.Her smile has captured my imagination.

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  • Kristin Melissa
    November 28
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    This is so beautiful in so many ways... and also at this point in my life slightly heartbreaking though I know it is not meant to be. I found someone I love more than the man I am with but thanks to a single conversation the guy i love refuses to even speak to me. I'm so sorry I shouldn't bore you with my problems. Koodles on such a wonderful write.
    Though my favorite lines have to be:
    "Let me give you everything
    true love does inspire"