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A discourse of great proportion

Man of the earth looks to sky, admiring the stars of the night
Man of the stars sees fireflies and wonders why Man of the earth looks so far

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Firefly prompt- 1st prompt

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  • HereComesTheSun
    October 17

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    great use of words and how they came across.
    it was just something you would expect a philosopher to say.

    thanks for entering