is denim even a colour?
i honestly don't know
if it is-
it's the colour of memories
like the bluenotes ads -"if jeans could talk"
they go through everything
hugging you tight
like the best friend you never had.
the light ones,( the really stretchy ones)
those are the colour of a first kiss.
they clash nicely with the green painted lockers
that hold a little piece of your soul
for 10 months of the year
the same lockers
that held the weight of the world
while you disappeared for a few moments of
bliss
the dark ones ( the really skinny one)
personify the colour of friends.
she had the same pair
it was an insta-friend kinda thing
that ended with a much needed sleepover
the same sleepover
that introduced you into the world of love
on a whole new level
if jeans could talk
they would tell of the puddles you jumped in
the boys you kissed
the friends you had
the things you experienced
and as the dye washes out
the memories hold fast to the threads
and as holes appear
they cling to the stitching
and the denim holds the secrets
that no one else in the world will ever know
and if denim is a colour
i know exactly the colour you mean....
Author notes
Prompt: denim
likey?
A contest entry
- color me beautiful [come take a look] by HereComesTheSun.
850 points, ended October 24, 19 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Any ways i could have possibly make this any better?
Comments
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Beautiful write. Made me think of the Travelling hood of the sisters pants. Congratulations on the Gold!


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i see it... i see it...
those were good books
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UMM WAY FREAKING BRILLIANT
loved love loved loved loved the piece
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wow thanks so much for gold!
definitely not expecting that
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