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First

I don’t know how
to tell you this,
but,
from the first time
I met you,
there was no one else.
I looked into your eyes and
it burned my soul.
I wanted
to touch your face
to make sure you were real.
Sound stopped as I stared
at you.
People moved
all around me
but
my attention stayed focused on you.
I didn’t know people like you existed.
I hope
you felt it too.

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