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Undone

You may not know this yet,
maybe you will soon.
It's worth a shot -
so expose this dartboard.
You're so captivating,
so beautiful,
and you're so frusrating.
I was never prepared for vunerability.
I was never prepared to feel like this.
No false pretense, or dream of mine,
but simply reality.
I'm happy about my life,
for the first time.
You leave me concussed
with no sense of direction.
This confliction within my mind and heart
has been going on for days on end.
You're the only one, to make me feel like
I can be undone.
I'm so alive, I'm so awake,
my hands move from place to place,
on you.
You've made me feel like this -
look at what you do.

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  • Glenn Gutkowski
    October 15

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    Happiness is a funny sort of feeling, right? Its like... being completely content with everything in the world, no matter how fucked up it can get. Of course, this sort of invincibility is only an illusion; there's always that hole in the armor, right over your heart. Its an odd sort of paradox, love and happiness. But I'm glad for you. You seem a good deal happier in this poem.