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Description of My Love

The BEST feeling in the world,
Is to wake up in her WARM embrace
To look and watch the morning light
DANCE upon her loving face
Everytime i see her SMILE
My Life Lights up a little MORE
And everytime I hold her close
I feel something I've never felt before

Each complication,fear,or worry
-That once lingered at my core-
Senses HER, than turns and RUSHES
RUSHES, rushes
out the door

The emotions in her SPARKLING eyes
Are worth more to me than JEWELS
Or GOLD
The TOUCH of her hand
INTWINED
With mine
Can make me FEEL-
VIBRANT
&
BOLD

ELECTRICITY
A RAGING fire
unquenchable by any man
A CHEMISTRY thats WILD and FREE
a cresendo DEEP inside of me
A TSUNAMI of uncontrollable passion
Is what I feel
When She's with Me

Everytime her laughter SINGS
My Sorrows and Frustrations float-
WIth the Flowing GUSTING breeze
Of HER inspired Gracious
HOPE

She makes me feel
I have a chance
a SHOT-At Living-
Happily
Like-
I could make it
On my own
IF I ever was A L O N E
BUT

Because of HER- I'm not alone
Because she IS- I am complete
Basically,
what I'm trying to say is-
She's the other PART of...
ME

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  • THE CAPITAL WORDS MAKE IT REALLY ANNOYING TO READ. JUST SAYING. THEY'RE NOT NECESSARY.