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Enough.

Is it wrong of me to want you,
even though you could never want me?

Is it wrong of me to cry,
when my heart is filled with pain?

Is it wrong of me to use the razor,
when life just seems to drag?

Is it wrong of me to walk away,
When I've just had enough...

Is it any good?

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  • monkey luvr
    October 9
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    nice job


  • AlexandraHamilton
    October 8

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    Such questions that one asks of themselves and others. Such is humanity, written in this poem. Well said; keep writing