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Lost

I am lost, but not found,
I am seen, But not heard,
Tell me why?

A contest entry

    I plan to revise this poem: please leave constructive criticism!
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  • kendale4ever
    November 5

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    good

    i havent spoke to u in a while and i miss talking to u and i ask myself the same question everytime u pop in my head...i feel lost without u and idk y and i guess i need time to figure that out especially for a person that i never met but brings so many emotions to my life


  • Kathraina silver member
    October 16

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    I love what you've done with the prompt.
    The question at the end really brought everything here together. This piece is very relateable to alot of situations and readers, including myself.


    bravo and thank you for entering



    ♥ kate


  • AlexandraHamilton
    October 8
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    Because life is a maze of illogical directions, that's why.

    Well said.

    Keep writing.