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Nuclear Malaise ~ conversation with Rip vanWinkle

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Rip vanWinkle heard them
somewhere upstate
buried deep
in October Kodachrome leaves

He told me this some time ago
when I sat, frog damp
lamenting the passing of by-gone days
weeping in his thick Dutch beard

So what? he said
If Oppenheimer regretted the very thought
of what he did
he was no God
was he?


I snuffled at the vision of pretty Lorraine
soaked in the bitter rain
of that last air raid drill
dried my eyes on brittle paper
advertising the latest trend
in air conditioned air raid shelters

Rip passed the aged clear white Genever
we drank and smoked some potent
Mohawk Indian weed
it helped erase my nuclear malaise

He put his arm around my shoulders

Besides, he said
voice thick and rummy as a Wal-Mart Santa Clause
I love the sound
of those damn things going off
beats bowling balls to wake the dead
and you can hardly hear
the kids in Hiroshima talking
I don't speak their language anyway
wouldn't know a word they said

 

 

 

 

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Been reading up on the A-Bomb
(Timely, huh)

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  • Amera gold member
    October 29
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    This is really scary; scary because it’s so true. As always, you took the topic and flew with it.

    Love,
    Amera ♥


  • myrataal silver member
    October 19

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    Excellent!

    A very serious topic, yet I marveled at the sound and visual expertise -- painter!

    Pretty Lorraine, bitter rain, air raid drill, bitter paper ... Ah! those r-sounds, which I deliberately rolled in my Afrikaans tongue, just to feel its powerful built!

    Wondrous work, David.

    Be well, Poet.
    Myra


  • Mairi bheag gold member
    October 10
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    I'll go with Emmyb.

  • Rowan gold member
    October 9
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    I just loved the ending. What a unique way to look at these times. Really good David.


  • sweet arrival gold member
    October 8
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    timely and so well written. love reading you again


  • malmadre gold member
    October 8

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    The bomb has been on my mind lately...odd to see you write of it. I recently wrote of those days living in the secret city. I like that you confided in Rip VanWinkle. The description of him and your encounter was just priceless imagery. I think I saw him the other day, a greeter at Walmart, he will don his Santa suit sometime around Thanksgiving.
    This is great David.
    I love the new profile pic, Rach is a beauty!


  • Ellegirl silver member
    October 8

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    The A bomb-Man's creation of regret!...the site in Chicago..I want to see the footage you found. Years later, the wounds continue to resurface in genetic
    malformations...the permanent damage to the earth.
    Very Good!


  • Emmyb gold member
    October 8
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    Excellent stuff David.

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