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A message

Hidden between guitar riffs

Leading a generation

"Rebellion"

Author notes

I heart punk rock.

A contest entry

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  • islekine gold member
    October 8

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    Nice choice of words!


    rock and roll rules!
    thanks for sharing your talent!
    Best wishes in the contest and always!
    Write on and on...

    and


  • everyone1 gold member
    October 8

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    Very unique friend ... .




    ... and so very true the power of a tune. God bless you in this contest!

    ~ Love ~ James ~


  • VelvetWings
    October 8

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    Oh, this one is interesting. The poem really stands out because of the meaning, and also because of how it's structured. Keep writing and good luck in the contest!
    ~Sparrow