Every winter's night
I question why the
chair beside me
is now always empty.
[CHORUS]
Where are you?
Sit by me on this cold,
white winters night with
my arms wrapped around you.
Let us sit infront of this
log fire forever and listen
to the crackling sound
of the burning wood.
Lets huddle up and watch
the snow form a white
blanket on the cold,
crispy, frozen landscape.
Author notes
Well, this is like two things in one really...it's about missing that special someone and it's also about winter - christmas time, y'know...the good, joyful times xDD.
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Let us sit infront of this
log fire forever and listen
to the crackling sound
of the burning wood.
Lets huddle up and watch
the snow form a white
blanket on the cold,
crispy, frozen landscape.
these last two stanzas had so much imagery and feeling in it. i could actually hear the sounds and felt the emotions..and lately that hasnt been easy for me. great write -
Was very good....had nice structure and just nice to read
Well done -
nice
I like your poem. It's warm and I found myself looking for more to read.
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Oh this is beautiful I really enjoyed it, especially the chorus. It's simple but it speaks out alot. Wonderful job, keep up the good work!
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Very nice imagery. Yes, winter time can be hard when you're alone, I can relate to this poem.
Well done!
Nela
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It's beautiful... It makes me think about last year and the moments with someone special..and all those cold nights...
^^keep up the good work..
take care.. -
im sorry you are missing someone and christmasd is always a different time of year
a really great piece with alot of imagery, exclellent.
i hope things look up soon and you can rest.
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