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Sports Anthem...final verse workups

Our hearts are beating faster,
our hands are in the air,
we scream out loud inside a crowd,
you can hear us everywhere.
as a hungry beast, come watch us feast
solid walls of flesh will rise,
while we taste the bliss of your defeat
claiming victory as our prize.

Our hearts are beating faster
our hands are in the air,
we scream out loud inside a crowd,
you can hear us everywhere,
From the bleachers to the loges
you'll be made to understand
that no matter what your plan is,
you can never beat the fans.


Our hearts are beating faster
our hands are in the air,
we scream out loud inside a crowd,
you can hear us everywhere,
your brightest star's a meteor
on our home field you will fall,
unyielding we will cheer your doom
to the locker rooms you'll crawl



Our hearts are beating faster
our hands are in the air,
we scream out loud inside a crowd,
you can hear us everywhere,
Win or lose we're champions,
we must never break nor bend,
as back up teams with a dream,
We're our player's greatest friend.


Our hearts are beating faster
our hands are in the air,
we scream out loud inside a crowd,
you can hear us everywhere,
There's no place you'll find shelter
from our verbal pummels thrown
in deep snows or August swelters,
we're the best you've ever known


Our hearts are beating faster
our hands are in the air,
we scream out loud inside a crowd,
you can hear us everywhere,
We demonstrate the powers,
that a true fan base can hold,
we'll dominate and celebrate,
as we stand and watch you fold.

Our hearts are beating faster
our hands are in the air,
we scream out loud inside a crowd,
you can hear us everywhere,
The strongest man among you,
will be withered by our roars,
we can't be beat, we mock defeat,
we have seen it all before,
buried in our victory scores.


Our hearts are beating faster
our hands are in the air,
we scream out loud inside a crowd,
you can hear us everywhere,
like an earthquake we will rumble,
We’ll disrupt your victory plans,
Till in defeat you’ll stumble,
That’s why God’s created fans.

(c)-2009-Artwhimsically Yours Studio-MFB III-All Rights Reserved *by trackers.




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  • janeofdreams silver member
    October 10

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    Workups like helium

    This poem holds the spirit of impassioned fans like helium in a balloon. It has dazzle, it has spark, it has a brightly-colored ribbon for us to hold until the end----"Our hearts are beating faster, our hands are in the air, we scream out loud inside a crowd, you can hear us everywhere". So we hold the ribbon of those verses throughout the poem, our balloon swaying and bobbing with our thrusts and pulls to every dramatic moment of the game. Then, at the end, you give release to the ribbon, and by the ultimate, creative purpose of the fan, our balloon rises and rises, flowing back to the heavens. Well, it was a pretty inspiring poem....