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My Life before Me

My time on Earth,
limited and short.

I may die today,
or tomorrow.

I sit upon my horse
and bow my head to destany.

All that I am,
and all that I have been.
is laid out before me.

My spirit guide,
the Eagle.

My guardian angel,
the Elder.

My awatufl death,
the wolf.

My life,
black and white.

A contest entry

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  • spiritraven
    October 8
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    Wow

    Very deep write. Good emotion and thought provoking. Thank you so much for entering my contest