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Love You

This passion, burns.
This love, tranquil.
You are Andrew Matocha

A contest entry

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  • mgmc gold member
    October 8

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    Boy, Andrew Matocha is a lucky guy and if your love is tranquil, this is a very good sign. I'm 53 and have had many loves, most of t hem not tranquil but miserable. It must have a good foundation to last---and that means tranquil! Congrats!


    • Dragon24
      October 13
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      =^_^=

      yes he says hes lucky...what he dosn't know is that im the luckiest person on the earth. im young to have found love, but im one of the lucky ones.

      Saphira17

  • reveller silver member
    October 8
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    Lucky..

    Andrew Matocha, I hope the love and passion is reciprocated!! Thank-you for entering my contest