True value doesnt need batteries
True value doesnt cost a penny
True value can have many meaning
True value can be any feeling
True value doesnt laugh in your face
True value doesnt have an expiration date
True value wont leave you to suffocate
True value doesnt lie
True value doesnt hide
True value has another side
True value can only equal
The value of your life
Author notes
But thats just me....
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Comments
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a very strong and powerful poem. filled with many truths and much needed to be heard facts. repitition helps to get your point accross, in a good way. funny how sometimes we need to repeat something in order to be heard or to strenuously get someone to understand the importance. during todays times, it's hard for people to understand what 'true value' is, let alone the very word 'true' or 'truth' . nicely written and i wish you much luck in your entered contest. please let me know how it goes.
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This poem is meaningful and uplifting.
Thanks for entering!
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