our hearts beat
with the pace of drifting dandelion seeds,
and fingertips touch under lazy willow trees
our voice harmonizes
with the bluebirds beneath the clouds,
and two lonely souls connect on earth
summer sleeps with autumn
while the stars hide behind the moon;
this song is a melody barely tangible
Author notes
prompt: tangible
A contest entry
- Afternoon Delight, Anyone??? by Randomly Beautiful.
400 points, ended October 10, 5 entries
Gold trophy winner
• next poem in this contest, remove from contest
Suggestions?
Comments
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Whoa.
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Why is it but our voice harmonizes? That seems like it makes that stand against everything else, but it doesn't. Does it?
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Superbly penned.
Congrats for the well-deserved Gold.
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So beautiful. Sighable for sure.
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summer sleeps with autumn
while the stars hide behind the moon
and this song is a melody
barely tangible
so, sooo soothing. very calming imagery
and great narration
i really enjoyed this piece
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Excellent
What a great take on the prompt. So very creative, best of luck in the contest
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This is just beautiful.
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This is one shaweet write!!
Wonderfully penned indeed buddy,
All the best to you in the contest.
Ken
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