On a bed of rose petals
I lay in wait.
For my love to come to me
I pray not too late.
I lay there with nothing on
but a smile on my face.
As he comes through the door
and we embrace.
Kissing softly
as our tongues finally meet.
Now I feel like never before
now I feel so complete.
His hands upon my soft skin
as we begin to explore.
Needing each other
as never before.
I open myself up
and slowly take him in.
Our eyes lock and hold
as our love making begins.
Passionate and tender
Slow and oh so right.
Our love is consumated
as we make love tonight.
All night long
we love and hold.
The chemistry between us
can not be controlled.
As the morning light
through my window gleams.
I awake only to find
it was sunrise dreams.
Please tell me what you think
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The feeling of longing for love is so strong in this. I love how you let your emotions out in this. Dreams can seem so real you hate to wake up from them. Wonderful work SH
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Aww thanks SH! I hate to have "real" dreams like that! Thanks for the comment
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very nive indeed but dont ya hate it wen its all but a dream enjoyed it a lot tho
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So precious!
I lvoed every line and the last one, wow! Superb with the colors and roses.
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lovely
yummy ...this has my heart all aflutter...if there is such a word...but, you know what I mean...beating fast with longing..Yes, girls (women) can have "wet dreams".
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hmmm amazing but then again i expect no less from you.
if this piece would have been written this morning i would have asked what inspired it
even though i think i would have known the answer
i no longer have to ask where they go or tell you what to do with them lol
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This was very welll written. I enjoyed reading this. It flowed really nicely. It was also very moving. I am sure that some people can relate to this. Thanks for the read and keep up the good work!
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damn..
WHO THE HELL LEFT THE SHADES OPEN!? wow, sweetheart this was a beautiful and romantic dream..i pray you experience this someday..it's something i believe you deserve..excellent write my friend.
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this is the most sensual scene i have seen played out in my head all do, it was a great one too, loving and with a well lite passion, keep it flowing
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I know those type of dreams baby.You wake up and wish you could go back to your dream. They say dreams come true, sunrise dreams too:
Lovely poem.
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Thank you for the comment baby...yes sometimes wish I could go back to the dreams and stay forever.
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