You can not stop the wind.
For now that is my treasure.
Opponents become lovers,
Time holds for nothing but Fate.
I have become eldest of my family.
Father....he's passed away.
I am left to make amends, for the stain.
Holding us together,
while drifting down my own road,
riding my own breeze.
A kite to high to tangle in the limbs,
and clouds could never stop me.
.....Except on that day........
Something akin to courage, pulled me through,
burning through my body, exciting every blow.
Release the sickle under the sunset.
Along with your karma, I'll be there.
You can not stop the wind.
And in the Land of Fire,
I am it's mistress.
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Awesome poem about the mistress of the wind.You have gotten her persona down perfect.I truly enjoyed reading this and I can not wait to read the other 2 poems about charrys from Naruto. Pst,you should do a Shino piece for me lol
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Thanks! Temari is another one of my favs. I think she embodies a strong feminine character. I plan on doing a Temari & Shikamaru piece later too!
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Very good, but one line throws me off.
A kite to high to tangle in the limbs
The to after kite should be um... never mind. Screw the entirew "too, two, to" family.
Very nice write, my dear. Maybe you should do what I have been doing and not segregate your faves. I have a fave characters list and pieces and they're all from different genres... lol.
hugs.
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I hope you liked it. I tried to put diffrent elements of her life in the piece. so that anyone who knew her character would know what each line was referring too. Thanks.
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