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Internal Jazz

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Liquid motion, swirling,
two hearts, two bodies as one ~
enchanted, they dance
to the rhythm of their internal jazz.

Lead and follow, in close embrace ~
chest-to-chest, thighs and hips,
intangible, inseparable,
theirs is not about form --

    ...but a celebration of love.



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  • Hikari Lady
    October 23

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    Oh!!! This is so pure gold. It has a beautiful ring to it that makes the heart melt and the senses to yearn for that special someone. That's wonderful and sincere. Thanks for entering and good luck.

    Love
    ~Noor


  • individuality gold member
    October 11

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    liquid motion, that's my brain right now the lovely dance of life - even if you have two left feet you can still smile and move around the room to music and laugh - many a time i have had cohen playing and danced naked or half naked with my love. lyndsay comes into my mind here.


  • Night Hope gold member
    October 8

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    This is a lovely response to the prompt, Poet. I especially liked the phrase "the rhythm of their internal jazz". Good luck in the contest.


    • Xianaria gold member
      October 9

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      Thank you!
      I like that line, as well ~

      When I got to it, I wanted something that implied their song, but didn't want something that was overly used or cliche...

      ~ Tim