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The Waltz

Here we are dancing a waltz in each others arms,
Oh, your beauty and your charms,
Setting off all sorts of alarmes.

For this is our final dance,
There is no future, no chance.
Of many, this is our last dance.

We both know,
We' just decided it will not show.
No one else need know.

This one dance,
Is our last chance,
To dance one last sweet dance.

Then, Goodbye


INspired by the late, great Patsy Cline







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  • amysticwriter silver member
    November 9
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    Beautiful...

    one of my favorites in her time...


  • Rose Angel gold member
    October 22
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    The mood and lyrics remind me of Patsy..Keep penning, friend!


  • Sheilasbabygal4life gold member
    October 21

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    This was very well written.This piece had a amazing flow too it. I found this really enjoyable too read. Keep up the amazing work.


  • light to a dreamer gold member
    October 12

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    I think you meant ( chance ) on the 5th line. This is also a great flowing poem and makes you see that you have only one chance to have your dance. Well written