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One summer night

As i went outside the room of darkness
I saw your face in the glimpse of seconds.
You were smiling back at my worried days
Now I know that tears ran down my face.

That night, you were there by my side
Never left me until the night subside.
Now the only thing I could wish for
Is for you to be my knight in shining armor.

Tonight I knew where i belong
to these loving arms I'm ready to go on.
I will remember the day I loose my fright
And title this poem One Summer Night.

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  • aisunoichiko
    November 7
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    thank you Manda. I appreciate it. i will enjoy AllPoetry in my heart's content! XD


  • Manda Kathryn Greeters member
    October 8

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    Welcome to AllPoetry

    This makes wonderful sense; the romance and care you've penned is touching and sweetly expressed; my heart sighs with the words Good flow, rhyme and imagery

    I hope you enjoy AllPoetry and continue to share your words with us

    Stay safe
    ~Manda
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