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Rainbow Sun

Missing image

this restless season

is trapped in the nets

of monsoon winds.

 

peel back this season

of soaked moments

from the skin,

 

for a 'rainbow sun'

bakes and burns

from within...

 

a sun

that fell through

the pores

with the last kiss!

inder

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  • Mari Goes gold member
    October 10
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    As usual, your poem is very appealing, imageries and feelings, so well shown...


  • wave1080
    October 10
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    and its lovely :)

    this is beautiful , like your daughter in the picture