You've taken me
and molded me...
You've taught an angel
with a broken wing
how to fly again
a songstress how to sing...
A fallen warrior
to stand and fight
taken a darkened world
and added new light
And now I am flying again
through the brisk clouds
But me on the inside
is screaming to be let out...
Though my broken wing is mended
and my fulfilling flight restored
I still feel something inside
a piece of the heart still torn...
This tear shall always remain
and never be repaired again
even though the heavens
gave me an loving god-send...
For this pain cuts like a knife
and I am bleeding deep inside
a force so powerful
something I cannot fight...
You have come and healed my spirit
but my heart... ... ...
is Still Broken... ... ...
Comments are appreciated...
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i absolutly love the energy and flow and the imagery. in the line "gave me an loving- god send...." i think the "an" should say "a". i love the last three lines it is so what i'm feeling right now. absolutly great brov
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wow
alot of that i can relate to. those beautiful feeling and reading this brought back thoughts of my ex.....beautiful tragdic story.
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some things take long to heal then others. that is what they tell me, personally i think it is the person doing the healing. strong poem keep it flowing
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Brilliant, beyond words the emotion and the truth that still all of us mind, and spirit can be restored, the heart mended and yet never be the same, and broken is excellent. Blessings.
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Many thanks for your compliments guys!
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