Reading the test for the frist time,
Suddenlyn it fades into a postive line.
My emtions run wild,
Knowing inside my belly there is now a unborn child.
Wanting this for years,
Me and my husband shed a few tears.
I'm I going to be a good mother?
Different questions I began to ponder.
Water runs dry as the air fades,
Im so sceard, this time i cant run away.
Hopeing and wishing to finally comes ture,
Your only an inch in length but already im in love with you.
A contest entry
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Comments
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good
a sweet poem....congrats...
still quite a few spelling mistakes that you
need to address....other than that
this was a beautifull poem
and i wish u and your husband all the best
Jayde


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How sweet is this!!! Congrats!!!
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Nicely done.
Thanks for entering!
Best of luck in the contest! -
Wonderful, great write! Bravo, and keep penning.






