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The Unborn Wish


Reading the test for the frist time,
Suddenlyn it fades into a postive line.

My emtions run wild,
Knowing inside my belly there is now a unborn child.

Wanting this for years,
Me and my husband shed a few tears.

I'm I going to be a good mother?
Different questions I began to ponder.

Water runs dry as the air fades,
Im so sceard, this time i cant run away.

Hopeing and wishing to finally comes ture,
Your only an inch in length but already im in love with you.

A contest entry

Alexandrea Brooks

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  • Jayde1
    October 9

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    good

    a sweet poem....congrats...

    still quite a few spelling mistakes that you
    need to address....other than that
    this was a beautifull poem
    and i wish u and your husband all the best



    Jayde


  • Lady Wildheart
    October 8
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    How sweet is this!!! Congrats!!!

  • Nicely done.
    Thanks for entering!
    Best of luck in the contest!


  • JohnThePoet
    October 8
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    Wonderful, great write! Bravo, and keep penning.